|Reviews for Meant For Me|
| Brightstarr-Bella chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
Hmm. I like this :) You have some very nice phrases that I noticed; for example, describing achieving "the girl for whom it was everything" as "dizzying heights impossible at best."
And isn't it true that people who never want something, never fight to have it, are always the ones who end up getting it in the end? I like how you portrayed this idea at the end.
My only suggestion is that it could use a bit of editing, mostly small things such as "the reason to breather" - I'm guessing that was probably supposed to be "the reason to breathe." And capitalizing your i's. They're small things and they don't affect the quality of the meaning of your piece but they are kind of distracting for the reader.
Otherwise, good work! Keep on writing,