Reviews for Crossing Enemy Lines
CaitlinEA chapter 9 . 6/8/2010
So is this going to turn into a Romeo/Juliette thing between Ramon and Tati? Or is she staying with Mateo?
RoseBriar32192 chapter 9 . 11/29/2009
Ok 1. I'm not TOO surprised. 2. Things are adding up pretty well. 3. I'm on team Mateo! and 4. DUH! I loved this chapter! PLEASE update ASAP! - RoseBriar
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 9 . 11/27/2009
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 9 . 11/27/2009
a) how did I not get e-mails telling me this story was being updated?

b) 0.o I'm so shocked at the twist of events. I want/need more!

Update soon, please!
thefrogsareattacking chapter 8 . 11/8/2009

Why? Cause her dad is in the Mafia or a competative toaster selling business.

I like Ramon, he seems nice.

She's gonna like it there better than at home? Don't know your the writer :P

Good story!
Joanna chapter 8 . 11/8/2009
1. i'm about a 6 on the scale, i can't really understand why someone would want her kidnapped. (guess that covers #2 too)

3. Ramon sounds like a nice guy roped into something he doesn't really wanna do. He sounds nice and caring, and sweet, and i'd say there was room for a potential romance between the two of them!

4. ... Not a clue!

All that said, I really can't wait to read more of this story, and i hope that you publish more soon! I'm really TRUELY enjoying, you have good skills as a writer!
XxSCENEandHEARDxX chapter 8 . 11/4/2009
LOL I love this chapter! I'm not exactly confused, Ramon's family is in some type of mob business or something right? That means that her family is too, but he decided to keep it a secret from her, to protect her in a way _ Please update soon!
Imprisoned wit No Restrictions chapter 8 . 11/3/2009
answer and comments to your questions

1) i am mildly confused 5

2) cause i wanna know why she is getting kidnapped.

3) RAMON SEXY he sounds gorgous, like drop dead sexy gorgous... m damn girl

4) oky so daddy is a mexican american drug cartel and she dont know it... neither does momma dearest or if momma dearest does its her fault that her daughther got kidnapped. cause oky i finally got it momma spends drug cartel daddys money and her kidnappers think she knows something about it all right? i hope so
RoseBriar32192 chapter 8 . 11/3/2009
Ok I'm answering all your questions. One: On a scale of 1-10 I'm confused about a 3 or 4. Two: I'm confused as to why Ramon is nicer to her than the other guys. Three: Ramon's pretty awesome. He seems like he's going to try to help her out, cuz he really didn't want her kidnapped. Four: I'm guessing that he dad isn't really doing the job that she thinks he's doing. I'm also guessing that he's in a bit of a mess with these people. He might owe them money for example. Lastly, I think they kidnapped her to use as a ransom. ANYWAY this chapter came SUPPER fast and that made me excited! I loved this chapter, and I can't wait for another! - RoseBriar
HeyyyitsPickle chapter 8 . 11/3/2009
i am very confused that i think it will 10...i have no idea why they kidnapped her...i think Ramon's nice...i think that those dudes kidnapped her cuz her dad owes them something

update soon :D
XxSCENEandHEARDxX chapter 7 . 11/3/2009
O.O I-i-it's a cliffie! NO! Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chappie! _
RoseBriar32192 chapter 7 . 11/2/2009
YAY! An update! I know some people like cliff hangers, but I am impatient so UPDATE! K bye! - RoseBriar
RoseBriar32192 chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I think it should be a story. It took you SO long to update! I didn't think you were going to continue the story the way it was going! Ok, well, I know some people like cliff hangers, but I'm impatient, so UPDATE! K bye! - RoseBriar
VampireAcademyDB chapter 6 . 11/1/2009
Love this story! Update Soon!
RoseBriar32192 chapter 6 . 6/29/2009
EEKK! Awesome chapter! I loved this one, I think her and Mat are going to start dating soon! I can feel it in my bones! UPDATE SOON OR IT WON'T BE A PRETTY SIGHT! - RoseBriar
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