Reviews for Welcome to Heartbreak
cookiepiecookiepie chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
The conversation was... awkward, but, other than that, cool chapter. :)
deleted'acc2 chapter 8 . 6/2/2009
Oh when I say "I can wait to see when.." I really mean I caN'T wait. I promise I can get complete thoughts out...
deleted'acc2 chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
Hello again! For some reason, this reminds me of the song "The Fear" by Lily Allen...

Some grammar for you (to qualify this as a legit review): "'You got your prove. Leave.'” Proof perhaps?

Can wait to see when all the love triangle and father issues hit the fan!
Tesco Metro chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
Brilliant :)

I can't even big to tell you how perfect these characters are. They just seem so...real. They have faults, which some authors tend to neglect. So Cheers to you! I absolutely adore this story.

especially since I can relate so much to Eva...especially in the this chapter. Keep up the good work :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
Secret-Lives chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
Yey. Update. Love the progression of these characters.
HeartAngel13 chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
This story is the best i can't wait 4 the next chapter WELCOME TO HEARTBREAK ROCKS MY SOXS! i got so excited when u updated chapter 10! lol
monkyy109 chapter 10 . 6/2/2009
omg that was super duper exciting ;]...

mostly because im hiped because of the email ;]

anyways that was really good ;] ...but i was kinda hoping it was an update from TSS ;]
annie chapter 9 . 5/31/2009
i love this story its awesome, Please finish the story! i can't until the next chapter lol, great job
EternalFlame chapter 9 . 5/31/2009
oh i will! i promise i will stick around till the end D
righthere431 chapter 9 . 5/30/2009
Woohoo! They kissed! Not voluntarily but they did hehe. Now Rick should leave them alone because he's a loser.
HeartAngel13 chapter 9 . 5/28/2009
omg! i loved please don't stop writing 'cause this one of my favorites
Delilah Lillith chapter 9 . 5/28/2009
i just started reading your story, and i love it.

though there are grammatical errors, mainly just with using the right forms of words.

oh and when he says,

“It’s a bit difficult to do this sat, you know."

did he mean SITTING, rather than SAT?

anyway i cant wait for your next update.

be soon please!
ADG chapter 9 . 5/28/2009
aw shyt! something tes me his ass aint gonna be proposing to that oda gurl anytime soon omg he still needa punch the asshole dou deadass that was uncalled for
Lanie Is chapter 9 . 5/27/2009

It's adorable! I love Eva. ;D

DoesItMatter chapter 9 . 5/27/2009
Thinking of who *it* could be

It’s a bit difficult to do this *sitting* (not sat)

He didn’t answer, or *say* (not said) any damn thing.

Anyway, Great chapter. I seriously LOVED this one. The whole Rick scene is nicely done, the way you present it is really good, and now I'm starting to sound like some well renowned critic... But, whatever, you rock! I love the fact that you try not to a bring cliche into your story, and even though I believe that EVERYTHING in this world has already been tried once(we're growing OLD), it's refreshing to have someone trying to bring in the element of surprise which is so easy to do without nowadays and so easy to not even notice is missing. I mean, it's always a given that fiction, except for a few exceptions, has a happy ending. But the style in which you bring about that happy ending...that's something else. And... I like yours. Simple as that. Good work
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