Reviews for Welcome to Heartbreak
boredsoul34 chapter 5 . 4/8/2009
an idea u should do some chapters in adams pov
princessbleachhead chapter 5 . 4/8/2009
aw adam is falling for her

ey i wonder wat aunt deena thought of their talk in eva's bedroom

serious great chapter

few mistakes like when eva was talking to simon

and the part where she talked about her friends

i think u meant to say 'chris and lucy'

well apart from dat i loved that it was an emotional chapter

i bet adam feels like he should look out for her now


he is inlove hehehehehehe lol

eva is starting to develop something.

i think adam is looking for some1 to love him for him

not for his money.

cant wait for the next chapter


keep it up
anita darling chapter 5 . 4/8/2009

Fast, fast, fast! Please!

Let the Gods help you! XD
AlaraRose chapter 5 . 4/7/2009
This is now my new favorite story ever. I absolutely LOVE it, and I'm totally jealous of Eva. Not because of her situation or when Adam's a jerk, but because of the moments when Adam's real, nice and happy. I look forward intently to your next update. :-D
greenestar chapter 5 . 4/7/2009
I really really REALLY liked this chapter! It was AMAZING! I knew Adam's heart isn't as icy as his eyes! lol.

And it's cool you didn't update over the weekend cuz I was working and busy and I didn't have access to my computer.

Can't wait for more! Totally awesome! And Chris is HILARIOUS! :)
Julia Nathan chapter 5 . 4/7/2009
That chapter was good even though you do have some editing mistakes in there. Srry about my last review and how like unclear it was. What I was shocked about was the author's note about this chapter. So I love this story and it's really shaping up! :)
wolfprint chapter 5 . 4/7/2009
I love your story! It just makes me laugh and smile inside and out. Keep up the good work!
toujoursmoi chapter 4 . 4/5/2009

i already sort of sent you a message. Anyway i think you are probably gonna make adam take eva horse ridign or soemthing i guess. I think you might be taking the relationship a bit too fast. i noticed you spelt Maid like made once in this chapter but im not too sure where.

Anyway keep up the great work and update soon

Replenish chapter 4 . 4/4/2009

great start, great plot.

Your characters already have me captivated, I want to know more about Adam and I feel for bella.

Looking forward to your updates

KKHliboki chapter 4 . 4/3/2009
Well, this was another great chapter :)

I really like that you are making the story progress slowly but surely. It makes it seem so much more realistic that way, rather than just having Adam become Mr. Nice Guy and fall head over heels for Eva.

I particularly enjoyed the very end of the chapter. I was hoping Adam would come see her, but wasn't counting on it. I hope we get to see more of that scene in chapter 5 :). And I cannot wait for the next interaction.

Great chapter :) I am very excited for the next update!

myoneandlonely chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
Amazing. I'm inlove with the way Adam and Eva converse with each plot is very interesting. The characters feel so real. The events aren't messed up. Everything's awesome. You're a really good writer. Keep it up. I'll be waiting for the next update. :)
princessbleachhead chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
wow, deena and mr cooper wow

aww bless becca and eva they are good people

good friends even

oh and you had to leave a cliffhanger you

am pleased about the length of the chapter

i enjoyed reading it

pleae dnt say that deena is adam's father


oh adam can to apologise aww

i think he needs some1 different from rich and pretty.

thats way he is treating eva different

why is he in her room? lol

cant wait for the next chapter literally

great work though

oh by the way eva is so chats.

and she drifts of like me

thats why i like her hehehehe
anita darling chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
Damn. I want more. -.-

I'd bet that her day off is spent with *him* because of his not saying sorry when the *incident* occurred.

(I hope you can understand what I mean, because, well, I don't want to spoil this for other readers, because it happened to me once, and I was really annoyed!)
FlowerNinjagurl101 chapter 4 . 3/31/2009
hey great chapter...cant wait to find out what happens next.

udpate soon

great work!

greenestar chapter 4 . 3/31/2009
So god! I don't think I can wait for the weekend! Lol.

I liked the conversation Adam and Eva had while she was cleaning his room. He's a really nice guy, just misunderstood! lol. Oh man, your story kicks ass!

Update son please! :(
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