Reviews for Welcome to Heartbreak
luna boricua chapter 15 . 8/11/2011
ok I'm tired of Eva's low self esteem, always comparing herself to Rachel, saying she isn't as beautiful, rich and perfect as her (rachel). Hello! Rachel isn't freaking perfect, if anything she's a egocentric, plastic, snobby, and spoiled bitch (excuse the language)

Eva's got some soul- searching to do...
luna boricua chapter 14 . 8/11/2011
after 14 chapters I have come to the conclusion that Eva doesn't have goals in her life, is a masochist and immature...

If I were in her place in real life (including the part about being an orphan) after mourning, and crying my eyes out, I would make a plan to get out of that life as a maid, I mean open a bank account, save money and when I had enough I would get out of that mansion, ASAP! find work somewhere else and make a whole new life for me...

Also, being with Adam even thou they BOTH know they could never be together is cruel to them both, but especially to Eva... she should have cut the cord when she had a chance.

oh well, that just means there's a lot more drama to come...

Also you're a good writer, obrigado fro you're story!
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 31 . 8/3/2011
This story is amazing. Absolutely amazing.

Ok, I would have reviewed the other chapters as well, but I'm sure you wouldn't want 31 reviews cluttering your inbox from the same person.

The story has made me so emotional. (I think I'm just an emotional sap in general.) Chapter 30 was especially so.

This is some really heavy stuff. I had to stop reading during parts of the story because it was suffocating me. But in a good way. Sort of. Lol. Of course, this isn't nearly as heavy as Collision Course by Cupid's Psyche. Now that is really heavy.

Well, I'm sure you're busy, so I'll let you get to that now. Great job with this story, by the way.
Rosedreamer101 chapter 20 . 7/18/2011
what the fucking ef. eva is so fcking stupid. if i were her, i'd punch adam a few times, wait, no. a hundred times, and walk out the door, never see him again.
Rosedreamer101 chapter 13 . 7/18/2011
CutieSOS chapter 31 . 7/17/2011
This was the best stroy ever.

Like i would marry it and give birth to its babys.

it was amazing and if some one told me i couldnt finish it theres a good possibilty i would have shot them in the face. haha

I really loved it. :)
sora kinomoto chapter 31 . 7/12/2011
Great story! Thanks for sharing!
Letham chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I really like this so far! I REALLY LIKE IT. Adam sounds perfect. Tall, beautiful, long dark hair. FABULOUSSSS.
Mai ID chapter 31 . 7/4/2011
Wow... amazing story! I couldn't stop reading it till I was finished! I hope to see a sequel about Adam's clinic soon!
Rilan Morr chapter 31 . 6/30/2011
Ah, this was amazing! You're amazinggg. I loved this
daughterofthelight chapter 23 . 6/21/2011
Woohoo! Can't wait to meet Allison :)
daughterofthelight chapter 21 . 6/20/2011
yay! Eva finally gets it! Ugh I hope this isn't a sad ending... I don't like sad endings :(
daughterofthelight chapter 20 . 6/20/2011
Ugh I must admit, I'm kind of mad at Adam right now :P how can he choose Rachel over Eva! Eva's so sweet and, well, loveable!
daughterofthelight chapter 18 . 6/19/2011
Yay! I DEFINITELY liked a chapter through Adam's POV, it helped me understand him more :]
daughterofthelight chapter 17 . 6/19/2011
NOOOOOOO! They can't break up now! He just finished sticking his penis in her vagina the night before! They're prefect for each other!
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