Reviews for Welcome to Heartbreak
Amandybadd chapter 12 . 2/10/2014
Holy shit this scene was so HOT! The way you described how Adam felt and kissed Eva, ughhh they should've done it right then and there LOL
Amandybadd chapter 11 . 2/10/2014
Gosh I love chapter 11 so much! This is when it all started, the lust for each other which all began from their first kiss! Ooooh la la Adam totally wanted it 3 3
Amandybadd chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Omg I'm reading this for the second time right when i just finished it... If that doesn't explain how AMAZING this story this then I don't know what
Amandybadd chapter 31 . 2/10/2014
I've read so many fictionpress stories trying to find the best one that appeals the most to me and honestly this is the best one yet! Usually the stories here would get really boring and I'd never finish it but this story was certainly something else! It never got boring and the angst/drama and juicy romance always had me squirming and gasping in shock;)! I read this story for 2 days straigh, never leaving my bed! Gosh I can't get over how amazing this story was and I'm so sad it's over now! I love Adam and Eva so much! I'm so happy they had a perfect ending for one another! I enjoyed how you gradually made their relationship closer and closer and finally when the teasing/ provocation came I seriously couldn't put my iPad down. Thank you so much for writing this marvelous exquisite story that I will for sure read once again :)
Amandybadd chapter 29 . 2/10/2014
WOW this chapter was so heartbreaking! Like I bit off all of my fingernails because it was so sad and intense! So sad the story is almost done! Nooo! Come on Adam fight for your woman!
thatweirdgurl97 chapter 31 . 12/30/2013
Love it! 3 :)
KaccerMaldd chapter 31 . 12/27/2013
Liteerrallyy the best booook on Fiction Press .
AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
I'm enjoying this story but you really need to use a thesaurus. You use arrogant too much and it's annoying
The Red Girl chapter 31 . 12/11/2013
I truly loved Eva and Adam, very much I loved Eva... Adam was a jerk sometimes... but i guess they got their HEA :) I loved this story so much. I couldn't stop reading! you're simply an awesome writer! you know how to make people laugh and cry and all that.
Lolitroy chapter 31 . 10/24/2013
Finally finished reading his after months, ehe. Oka, I will briefly reinforce good and bad aspects. Good? It is a story many people like, as obviousy seen. Awesome stories can pass unnoticed when they are not "correct" in all senses. This is one of the more popular stories on FP, and there must be a reason, eh?

For the bad part, it's a bit too cliche. Especially the later chapters. I'm not gonna live... they were disappointing. Especially after having such great first chapters and twists. All the suicide and drinking thing was way too unrealistic, and pardon me for saying this, but a bit OoC as well. Sure, you wanted a thrilling story, but thrilling ca come off as annoying and unrealistic when not used in the correct way. While this was a great story, the sheer lack of concision (possible language barrier here) dropped thewhole thing off a cliff.

Nevertheless, it was an enjoyable story. Even with all the quirks, Eva and Adam are indeed one of the favorite couples and FP. Even with everything, it is an inspiring story. And most of all, it's something that will forever be on many of your readers' memories :)
Aspired Writer chapter 31 . 10/17/2013
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! This story let me speechless for the most part. Amazing and very lovable characters and the plot was perfect.
Adam and Eva are one of my favourite couples now, hands down.
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.

P.S. It was beautifully written and you're a very talented writer.
Dumbledork101 chapter 31 . 10/6/2013
Love this story!
MarilynBaby chapter 10 . 9/16/2013
Why does she call her aunt "aunt"? It seems a bit silly considering.
Coli chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
I got so engrossed in the story I sat up till 5am to finish it. Despite being incredibly tired the next day, it was well and truly worth it. The only thing was that I felt the ending was a little to extreme. Otherwise I just loved the story. Keep up the great work.
smashthat chapter 20 . 8/11/2013
Im sure this was a good story,but I stopped reading after she went back. She was askin for her life to be miserable. I'm sorry but I refused to read anymore.
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