Reviews for Welcome to Heartbreak
Ray-Anne chapter 31 . 7/24/2013
Staying up until 3:30 in the morning while I work at 8 AM tells you how much I really enjoyed this story.

Although there are some things I don't like about it. One, he would unlikely be graduated from med school at that age. Two. Goodness I have an 8 year difference and I would throttle mine if he ever considered our age difference enough for him to call me a child. Three. (Not the fault of your story) Damn the drama of romances; it's why I generally don't read them as they are way too much.

All the same, I loved yours thoroughly. You're an extremely talented writer.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
And by the way, most medical students graduate at 26.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
Slave? She's getting free housing, free food, and money to do her job. Eva's not a slave, she's a working woman.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
Just curious, why did you make Eva so self-absorbed and unwilling to work, or at least, thinking that the work of a maid is beneath her? I mean she's 18, her mother just died, you would think she would throw herself into the work to try to distract herself. I worked as a cleaning lady during high school and served as a maid/waitress during functions where I had to pick garbage up, and I never once thought that I was too good for that kind of work.
LateNightTurtle chapter 30 . 7/8/2013
Not trying to be mean, because you are a really great writer and this is one of my favorite stories to reread, but the drinking and the suicide were really.. unnecessary. It kind ruined the story. It was way too dramatic and definitely overrated. Plus, Eva never drank a sip of alcohol once in any other chapters before. It's just a little too unreal. Buuut, other than that, I really do love this story! I love all of your stories, honestly! (:
AllisonRKnight chapter 31 . 6/25/2013
seriosuly... I practically read this story every 6 moths or so,. Because I love it. one of the best I've ever read, and if you ever publish a book let me I'm so going to buy it!
Prodigee123 chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
this is good
Prodigee123 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Goodness, not trying to be inconsiderate or anything but the tears was a bit too much. The image of her wailing in the taxi I kind of imagined it as humorous. Especially with the taxi driver I could imagine how strange it was for him to have to deal with her. The whole issue is indeed sad, but I wish that she would at least try and be stronger. Because I think shes going to need it. Great story can't wait to read more.
AlexisKrause chapter 31 . 6/19/2013
Wow! This was so fabulous. I just read it start to finish the last few hours (because I couldn't stop! I'm so glad this story was completed already because I don't know if I could have handled being so anxious for an update!) and it was amazing! You're a fantastic writer and I can't wait to start reading the sequel.
AlexisKrause chapter 17 . 6/19/2013
So I found this story today and I have been reading it straight for the last few hours and I'm addicted! And my mouth literally DROPPED when Adam proposed to Rachel and even though I had a bad feeling that was going to happen and it happened anyway, I still said, "oh. my. god." You're a fantastic writer and you've really made this story and these characters come alive! I am going to continue reading and I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, I'm really mad at Adam!
Black is Beautiful chapter 31 . 6/4/2013
I loved this so much! The ending of so cute! I'm definitely adding this to my favourites!
macy8 chapter 16 . 6/1/2013
this is a great story and all but it is really starting to annoy me to the peak...they need to be together soon!
macy8 chapter 14 . 6/1/2013
OMG! i cant believe that just wow
macy8 chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
good so far
NothingMoreThanLife123 chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
Haha, they're entertaining as hell. Adam's an ass, it seems. And Eva, well, is in a rough situation. Really well-done.
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