Reviews for Welcome to Heartbreak
Guest chapter 31 . 2/19/2013
This is by far the best story you've written, the angst and heartbreak basically the emotions portrayed are incredible, when you read it, its like you live the story! Those are the kind of stories I love. Thanks for writing this :)
Dandy352 chapter 31 . 12/27/2012
That was bloody brilliant! It was beautiful :) Full of drama. Wow, just wow.
Minglielizabeth chapter 31 . 12/26/2012
You are now one of my favorite authors on fictionpress. This story was phenomenal! The emotions you brought to the characters was just perfection. I could not stop reading and I lost sleep because of it, but it was worth it! I am so excited for the sequel and I hope you make it unique from this one. I have faith you will exceed my expectations on the next book. I wish I could have as much talent as you have with writing stories. :)
Dandy352 chapter 16 . 12/26/2012
I'm guessing he's just about to propose to Rachel. Isn't he?
Dandy352 chapter 13 . 12/26/2012
You know you have a great story going on. :) I enjoy reading. All the tension, the confusion...still as a girl, I couldn't help but think, it may be a fairy tale going on for Eva and Adam. But I couldn't help thinking about Rachel's side. Rich girl or not, she has every reason to be mad if she finds out. Eva and Adam may not be doing anything, but just the fact that it's something he doesn't want people to know gives it the title of suspicion, temptation even. No girl deserves to be hurt like that, not even Rachel.

So I'm curious to know what's gonna happen.
Dandy352 chapter 5 . 12/25/2012
He's a good person :)
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Nice beginning! :) I liked it!
tye-dye eyes 191 chapter 31 . 12/23/2012
YEAHHHH HAPPY ENDING! do you know how scared I was that Adam was gonna die? Extremely scared. So glad I took the time to read this!
Nocturnal-Silver-Wolf chapter 27 . 12/23/2012
Holy crap... Mr Cooper is such an awesome awesome awesome awesome person! Hahahaha I thought I would like him... Can't say the same for his son though...
Nocturnal-Silver-Wolf chapter 21 . 12/23/2012
What a douche. Eva should have just let herself get raped, and it would serve Adam right. She shouldn't have even gone back to work, should have just gotten a job. Sorry I'm being harsh, but she's just too weak.
Psycho-Troll chapter 21 . 12/16/2012
Eva is so weak to even go back with Adam...
veroniica chapter 31 . 12/9/2012
Only one word: BEAUTIFUL! Keep writting! :)

Un bico (beijo) dunha rapaza galega (Galicia- España); sigue escribindo que o fas moi ben.
missyb1988 chapter 31 . 10/30/2012
wow loved it so much :) I was totally gripped with this storyline. I was so relieved Adam and Eva got there happy ending, I thought the ending was written very cliche, but it still was amazing. I can't wait to read the sequel and check out your other stories :)
jennnnnnyy chapter 31 . 10/29/2012
I just finished the story and wow!It's so amazing. It brought me to tears during certain parts & I'm so happy for Adam & Eva. I really hope you'll upload an epilogue to this soon :)it will be so awesome to see some after life for Adam & Eva! Thanks so much for posting this AWESOME story!
evelynn.bonathan.37 chapter 31 . 10/26/2012
love this is OUB the sequel if it is i sooo can't wait to read it :)
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