Reviews for Projection
Ashelin chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Interesting use of quotation. I liked how you listed characteristics that others may percieve of you. It was a strong way to start the poem off. There wasn't much depth to it, but it was a bit witty. I'm not a fan of italics/bolds/underline, but that is only my personal humble opinion. For a short poem, it holds the bare minimum, but it doesn't feel incomplete. I don't think it was meant to be a long-lasting make your mind churn sort of poem, but that is ok. You did well, good job.
mikey magee chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I liked the subject of this poem. The ideas of projection and projecting your own insecurities on someone else is nice.

The only thing I would watch out for is the form. "LOOK IN THE MIRROR." Having this line and the last line in bold and underline is a bit much. Instead of trying to bring so much attention to it, just make it it's own line or stanza. That way it gives the lines just as much power and doesn't detract anything.

Nice poem. Keep Writing.
Isca chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
"If you think I'm...LOOK IN THE MIRROR!" Wow! Hard-hitting message and tone! :)
ClosetPianist1 chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Amazing!probably one of the best I've read on here. lovely peice! keep it up.
lymli chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
it's a meaningful poem.