Reviews for DollFace
chromo freak chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I liked it a lot, very interesting!
broken from the past chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
This is a good poem.
oxytocin chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I really like the style of this poem, and my favourite stanza is the second, with the imagery of the make-up running; it's so sad and touching. I like the repetition of the one of the stanzas; it brings the poem to a nice conclusion. However the final line doesn't quite fit with the rhythm of the rest of the poem - it's too random, too on it's own. I like the actual line, but I think the build up to it needs to be more stable, because it kind of came out of nowhere. Lovely read though, keep writing!
lilsis chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
now lael1bologna i know in this you worte

Hey, doll-face,

Why so sad?

Don’t be crying,

on’t be mad.

and i think you might what to change it to


Why so sad?

Don't be crying

Don't be mad
SylvaDragon chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Oh I like this, I think it has meaning for me in a way that's difficult to explain. I can relate to the verse about imaginary bliss, and the person who stares back at me. I really don't like mirrors at all.
strobeXlightXstatic chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
AIYEE! I am jealous! Stop writing such good poems! (by far one of the best)
Isca chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
The majority of the poem is creative and simple, and then BAM, there's the line: "I think you're the person who stares back at me in the mirror." This line adds such a powerful, mature tone to the poem. Keep up the good work. :)
disappearing in the shadow chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
hmm i like it

very intresting (in the good way)
Thornprick chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
this is awesome! it's like creepy but beautiful and awesome! I'm adding it to my favorites!
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
"Miss doll-face,

Hey, how are you?

Because I'm in hell,

But I'll make it through.

I'm just checking on you."

I loved that part! And it makes me think of like a person that was someone, then changed to be someone else...You know? I don't know, correct me if I'm wrong. It was a very nice poem! D