Reviews for Broken
yuanyuan chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
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running-in-the-rain chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
What claim does this prince have on this Efäleañ healer?

What power of his annihilates her willful freedom?
Noiria Ednir chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
I really enjoyed this poem. Being a fellow fantasy lover, this was great. When I read it I felt as if I were there. To me, that is a sign of amazing writing.
FuckMeAlice chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I like the change of format that seperates the two stories. Too often when people change the format it's often a dizzying collage of fonts, so this was merciful on my eyes. :)

I also really really liked the concept. Though the idea isn't too fresh, the execution of the idea is, so it deserves some praise.

Can't find anything I don't like about it.

-Stardust, courtesy of Review Marathon. (link in my profile)
Thornprick chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
this is great! and sad and awesome! yay!
Isca chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Since I loved the allusion to the "Efäleañ," I shall respond in Quenyan (Elvish):

Melwa lairë! ("Lovely poem") :)
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Very nice poem :)
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
"Broken poor solider,

Was so surprised that

She’d never spoken."

That was my favorite part!