I really really like this story. I know it was published forever ago, I just wanted to say I'm really impressed with the natural progression and interactions between characters. I appreciate the sometimes awkward flirtation, and the very realistic excitement/nervous doubt on both ends.

I have a feeling that Natalie and Ashlee are going to have hatred for each other before they even realize that TJ has a history with each of them; my guess is Ashlee is going to be her professor in a class and one if not both of them will not like each other.

I really enjoyed this story. You guys are very talented and you do a great job developing your characters. There were a few parts of the plot that seemed to either resolve themselves too easily or only be mentioned briefly. (For example, the other students finding out- including Natalie's roommates). Also, I was surprised by how Natalie's parents just let her go back with TJ so quickly. But overall, I liked this story a lot. :) Hope you guys continue writing!

I just can't seem to get enough of you two. I like this story a lot. I feel like most of the professor-student relationship stories here on Fictionpress are always so pretentious, so it's nice to see a story that shies away from that and tells a good story.

The ending is cute. I might have liked for it to be more about the two of them than the kids, but I guess that's just the whole picture, isn't it? I'm so amazed and impressed with how they dealt with everything. To be honest, in the first half of the story I didn't care for TJ much, just because despite being 30 years old, he seemed so lost and clueless as to what he wanted. He was pretty immature in that sense. Finding out that Natalie was pregnant though seemed to really shape him up. I'm not sure why but the first half of the story just didn't seem as developed as the second half, in terms of both plot and characters.

It would have been also nice to know what ever happened to TJ's teaching career. It was a little anticlimatic when his students found out about them though. I feel like there should have been more drama revolving around that, but instead it was just kind of rushed through and brushed off. I know that TJ said that in the long-term the only benefit would have been free tuition for his kids, but I know earlier on he commented that he genuinely liked his job as a professor. I guess it also seemed weird that he would risk his job in the early stages of his relationship just to pursue a casual relationship with Natalie, considering how "not serious" he was about her. I would have thought he'd need a bit stronger feelings that just that to take that risk.

Another thing that I couldn't help but wondering is... don't they have cameras in the elevators and hallways of the dorms? Just a thought. I never really did understand why they took the huge risk of hanging out in the dorms, other than the first time, when TJ came over drunk.

Anyway cute story. I want to read your Zack and Anna one as well. The only other thing I would have to say about this story was that it was a bit weird to read about Ashlee and Gavin, since they have the exact same names as in One Night Stand except that they are different characters. I saw a lot of similarities between the two stories. Like the same issues are brought up, you just chose to pursue different ones more deeply.

Best of luck writing.

- Alyssa

I love how you guys write. Its refreshing :)

i'm not a fan of cigarettes or cologne, but what is it about the two mingling on the right man (er...possibly *wrong* man...but that's another story) that is so delicious! good story so far.

Love it~!

GAH! I LOVED this story! Great job! :D

Beautiful story, I couldn't stop reading once I got started .

great story:)

Aww and they all lived happily ever after: super cute. Your new story looks cool.

this is so sweet. tj n natalie sweet moments with their children

why don't they ever go to HIS apartment? which is so much more logical because they don't have any risks of being caught or anything

Sigh. I'm going to miss reading this story. I thought you did a very good job writing it. It was very realistically portrayed. And I really liked how you did this epilogue. :-)

...I'm trying to figure out why this story doesn't have thousands of reviews, and I'm getting nothing. This is completely amazing. I'm going to go read the rest of it now and give you my full opinion when I finish. Try not to die without knowing what I think, cause I'm that important ;).