Reviews for The Changelings of Syre
AlexisLovesYou chapter 15 . 10/13/2009
Qatariyah chapter 15 . 10/12/2009
VERY engaging it's to the next brother(the spy) right? and then what? will there be a LONG epilouge with all eight characters!

continue forward..
Qatariyah chapter 14 . 10/11/2009

Is there going to be a part FIVE for the hunter's game? or are you going directly to the generals' story?

Can't wait for the next installment...

Good job!
jj chapter 14 . 10/5/2009
Silvertwinkle chapter 14 . 9/30/2009
LUV what you've got so far. Please continue :) I really want to see where all of this connects. Keep it coming :P
MuseofMagic chapter 14 . 9/14/2009
There's not much I can say about your work, despite the fact there there is much I WANT to say. The ideas get lost in translation from feelings to words. I suppose the best I can do (and it by no means satisfactorily sums up my thoughts) is say that these stories are fantastic and inspiring.

Most of what they inspire is admittedly jealousy and adoration. Your characters are fantastic and the chemistry between them evident, except perhaps Miranda and Dantes. I sort of felt their interaction was less developed and there could stand to be more happening between them before they give in like with the other two stories.

Altogether though I really enjoy your writing and characterization - and Meirion, though twisted at first, is probably my favorite character thus far. I have a "secret" love of demented/arrogant/prideful/twisted/, but well-meaning men, heh.

Keep up the great work, I look forward to more and I hope to see someone rip off Lady Giselle's haughty little face soon o.O -coughs-

~ Cait
dutchess123 chapter 14 . 9/12/2009
i love your story! it is flipin awsome! you deserve more than just a hundred coment! o and i love ridiculously long reviews there the best! yay you!
Cheska DiBlassio chapter 14 . 9/11/2009
making it an even 114 :) just so you know, seeing that this had an update made my shitty week a hell of a lot better.
pinkeclipse chapter 14 . 9/10/2009
LOVE the story! Im glad the three all met!
Rosetiger13 chapter 14 . 9/9/2009
ekek! hehe I'm pretty sure I have the shivers! yayayayayayay! This so made my day! yay! I can't wait for more!
Jennyt82 chapter 14 . 9/8/2009
I actually read this chapter the day it came out but i was rushing off to work so it's taken me a while to get round to reviewing. What more can i say but...I LOVED it! You're a fantastic writer and how you manage to get so much detail into short stories amazes me. In fact it amazes me so much that i want your advise. I've written two (well practically two) full stories and i'm working on the third and while i fully intended for them to be short which to me is about 60-80,0 words, they've turned into epics. The next series i have in mind i want to stay within those boundaries, any tips?

Oh and post the next chapter quickly. ;)
MadameLeQueen chapter 1 . 9/7/2009
Gahh! The fourth story seems even more interesting :D Love all four of them x) can't wait :D
MadameLeQueen chapter 14 . 9/7/2009
Ooh, she's a feisty kitten XDD I LOVE IT :D

great update(:
kris89 chapter 14 . 9/7/2009
i thought she was a changeling too. wont she change at some point?
Ck90 chapter 14 . 9/7/2009
It was great as always! I'll read it again later to find the forshadowing, I was to exited to think of little else other than reading!
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