Another amazing chapter, poor Reule, he has no idea what's going on. I still want to know just exactly what Adara's hiding so hurry up and update so we can find out ;)

excellent chapter! i have been checking almost everyday to see if you updated and am so glad you did! i'm excited having found out what kind of changeling reule is but i didn't know the word wyvyern so i looked it up. as a suggestion, i think it'd be great if you could incorporate him actually changing into his form in the next chapter or so and describing adara's reaction. hope you update soon!

That was a horrible way to end it! I want more! I love the way you keep adding events into the story! It truly is fascinating how you come up with it. I also like the fact how each of the characters react differently to their situation. I thought they would be considered married already or is that just in changeling custom? Anyway! UPDATE SOON!

hehe very good. I like it! Especially how you replaced that one word that I wasn't sure about with 'cornered' excellent! However I regret to inform you that I missed one very important mistake that needs fixing, unless it was supposed to be that word. The part where Sophie and Miranda come and Adara backs up and is wondering why there are two strangers with Reule she thinks: "...he knew it was impertinent that she remained hidden?" unless it really isn't important for her to be hidden, we need to get rid of "im" in front of "pertinent" :s Can't beleive I missed it really. I honestly was in a bit of a rush but that is something I should have caught.

Anyway it feels, sounds, and flows a whole lot better than before and really feels like the start of something big coming. Ominous hehehe can't wait for the next part :D

Hey! You have an awesome set of the stories. The concept is certainly interesting ;)

This is really good. Keep it up. :]

MORE! MORE! MORE! I love this one. So far it's my favorite.

i love your story it is freakin awsome! yay!

Just stumbled across your story by accident and I'm really glad I did, I love it and can't wait for more!

Good chapter! I like the conversation between Reule and Adara. We learned some interesting information. Update soon! I can't wait to see what she says about him being cursed! :-)

OMFG! can't wait for more! please get an update soon!

happy writing

rosetiger13

ek yayayayayayayay I'm so excited! I'm pretty sure that these are my favourite stories! I love them to death; the combination of fantasy and romance, and historical aspects. Sigh, such a good read. beautiful writing as well.

yayayay!

happy writing as usual

rosetiger13

loving this story! interesting plots. i like how each person has their own little short story. update soon!

Great chapter(: They're cute, haha.

So, Adara is holy and Reule is cursed? As in yin and yang?

haha, opposites attract XD

If it means you'll continue to provide more lovely updates, please, sit in front of an LCD screen as much as you like. This in turn gives me an excuse to sit in front of my computer and read them. I quite enjoy your story so far. This third part, with Adara and Reule, may be my favorite part yeat, though we'll have to wait and see. I really like your style of writing and how the seperate parts of the story remain seperate, yet still form one whole. I can'twait for the next update. Keep writing!