I loved it! is that really sophie? or is it giselle? Well anyway O'm glad she decided to stay! Happy Writing!

Interesting concept for a story. Do you mean that they are mates (stay together for their entire lifetimes?). I liked the first parts love story better, the second is a 'lil creepy with him kidnapping her and everything. Although, i find Sophie more real and likable than the first heroine.

I look forward to the rest of your story.

Omg! This is by far the most addicting story ever :) good job :D

Really can't wait for the next chapter! Is she a changeling as well? It seems so how else could she move with such grace and agility. Also I want to know what Sophie was thinking when he jumped from the window! Happy Writings!

Wow . . . I really like this story! I'd love a hot, smexy scene next chapter!

just fyi-courtesanmistress. courtiera person at a royal court.

Interesting story. Not bad. Hope you update soon.

...Snow

Wow! This was an awesome chapter. The way Giselle is described was perfect. I could totally imagine that villainous siren sitting there, covered in berry juice. Also, Meirion's inner conflict here has defintely explained a few things about his charcter and at the same time, has added a whole new interesting facet to this story. Keep up the amazing writing and I'll keep my fingers crossed for an update.

Thanks,

~FunnyB

P.S. I love the Sophie-Meirion interactions in this story

P.P.S. I hope your favorite food isn't really "Friend Chicken". lol. My baby sister loves that book.

Total page turner! Can't wiat to read more.

Giselle is really really creepy... I hope that Meirion takes Sophie's chain off soon...

I love it! Can't wait to read more...

As requested a review, loved the chapter, hated Giselle, but i guess that's what you were aiming for so it's fine. I hope Meiron realises the error of locking poor Sophie away soon. She deserves better than to be left languishing in a tower. Update soon. )

Looking forward to your next update

Wow, you have a great writing style that I find very engaging. I really wish you would turn these each into novels, not that you haven't done a great job in the short story area. The only issue I have is your editing, which seems to always have missing words in the sentences, incorrect viewpoints of he/she when either the male or female character is talking, and some rather odd word choices for the image you are trying to create. I don't have time really to find all of the exact occurrences of these, but it's something that I would watch. On the all and all though, you have a great idea here that I look forward to continuing on Sunday! Keep up the great work.

Strange, but a good idea.

I promise to keep reading, as long as you keep writing.

Isamara

Well that was sexy. Nuff said.