AH!

Ugh! I most definitely hate cliffhangers! :p Okay. Please update soon! I am begging you! I really really want to know what's going to happen! :D I saw this alert and I got so excited. I even jumped up and down. :) I really love this! Please please please update soon!

Lmfao. Best fucking chapter ever. I think Saphiri is definitely my favorite character in the story - she's just fantastic all cunning and tricky.

Update again soon! You're right when you say I don't want to miss what happens next. I'm dying to find out.

~ Caiti

It would serve her right if Phavian kicked her butt out for humiliating him like that. Dying to find out what happens next.

Loved the chapter can't wait fir the next one!

GOD! I haven't read this in like forever :D

LOVE IT :D

please update soon :-( I'd wait another year for your next update though. but please update soon! this is awesome

When are you going to update?

How you managed to slip TWO chapters by me without my knowing is beyond me. I got the notice about chapter 17 going up, but not a single one about 15 or 16. I was quite irate when I started reading 17 only to realize two sentences in that it didn't follow the last thing I'd read. If it wasn't such a bother I'd definitely bitch to fictionpress about that little issue with lack of notifications. -tuts quietly to herself-

Anyway! I'm very pleased to see you've updated, I've been waiting for ages! Then of course when I get the notification I'm unable to find free time to read for over a month, but between Christmas with the family and going back to uni and a number of other things, it was to be expected. I've read it now and can I just say... I absolutely love Phavian and Saphiri already and this Vasya and bard seem like quite the interesting pair as well!

You've definitely got me on the edge of my seat, so update soon before I have to start making death threats and all other manners of unpleasant correspondence. Nobody wants that, trust me.

~ Caiti

This is like the best "M" rated story in romance in history! (Loud squeal)

Well, it took me a while to read this but I finally got around to it!

Pretty good chapter, I understand the Colonel's view better now, thanks, for clearing it up a bit.

Update soon! And her cousin's story sounds interesting...next couple i'm guessing.

happy writing,

rosetiger13

xoxo

I can't wait to see what her plan will end up!

Please UPDATE ASAP so I can FIND OUT!

~Mo~

I hope that the updates come faster but i can complain about the quality because your stories fassinate me! I think that the cousin falls for the other wyvner or whatever there called. I can't wait for the nexted chapter its hilarious how that girl is messing with the general. I love it!

keep up the good work! glad to have an update during the holidays :)

lol looks like the title is getting more accurate by the chapter