Reviews for Rawr Rawr Dinosaur
gum drop chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
Hop hop triceratop,

Belly flop, hippitty hop,

Tricera, cera, ceratop.

There once was dinosaur,

Where some had two feet,

she had four.

Her parents had a clever scheme,

but to this Dinosaur, it would be quite mean.

Hop hop triceratop,

Belly flop, hippitty hop,

Tricera, cera, ceratop.

Her parents had a clever game,

to give her a very strange kind of name

and they decided to call her

Gum drop.

Now this made gum drop very sad,

because kids in Dino school were very bad,

and called this little dinosaur all sorts of names

and little Gum drop got very mad.

So one day Gum Drop had an idea

she would become a hippitty hop,


and that would be her claim to fame

so all the kids in Dino school would stop

making fun of her name.

So she changed her name to

something fit for a hip hop dame,

and her parents were put to shame

when she was the best in the game

and thats the story of the

hippitty hop Triceratop

who didn't quite belly flop.

Tricera, cera, ceratop.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
LOL, this is cute. Yeah, a little silly, but who doesn't love something silly every once in awhile? Come on. And dinosaurs are pretty awesome, so hey, can't go wrong there. Keep writing! :)
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
haha. good little humour piece. like something that might appear in a book of children's poems.

it's the first happy-ish thing i've read in too long. thank you.

"despite it's fleas"

should be

"despite its fleas"

(but then again, i'm just a grammar freak. so never mind. :))
Stars.Shining chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Aha! I absolutly loved this! Made my night. Got a little long at the end, which messed a little bit with the cadence. But overall fantastic! Please write more! :D
centuriespast chapter 1 . 3/16/2009

That was SO funny!

I loved it!

A little bit of childish lit. to brighten the day, eh?

You had a spelling error in your summary: freind should be 'frIEnd' that's about it that I saw.

welp. it was amusing and I wish I could read more P