Reviews for Hollywoodland
collycoco chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Wow. For some reason this made me think of the Black Scarlet. I think thats what its called. it was back in the 20s where a girl was found dead, chopped up into pieces on a front lawn. She wanted to make it in Hollywood but someone killed her. Its still a mystrey.

HAH! Sorry I rambled. I love the title of this poem. It defintely says alot. It really shows a message

YAY YOU FINALLY PUT A POEM UP HERE!

Also, this poem made me think of the song "Hollywood" by Cute is What We Aim for.

WONDERFUL POEM! Write some more! :)
Alice Sleeps chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
So few words, such a profound piece. I especially like the title; it clarifies the meaning a bit and makes it easier to absorb. Also, the formatting is a nice touch. Far too many pieces wandering around without it. Keep writing :)