This is my favorite chapter and I love this story and how you write.

Love your writing! The story is amazing! Especially the ending, it's just love! Thanks so much for sharing!

I liked it and I liked the way it ended. I'm happy that Adrian hast gotten better. A sequel would be great, but I don't really know if I want one, because I'm afraid that some drama happens. Your writing - style is very, very good. :)

Sooo corny and sooo yummy and lovely! I really like this! Great job! :D
A sequel would be cool, although I don't know what you would do in it... :P I'm sure you can make it work.

Adrian is majorly embarrassing and hilarious and sweet :D
Has he got ADHD by any chance...?

I am liking this story! Gonna keep reading now... :P
but just thought I would say I think this is a mistake:

["HEY ADRIAN!" He screeches. I jump, and turn towards him, and manage to knock into Kian at the same time. The little bastard just came out of nowhere! What the heck, I wish he wouldn't do stuff like that. *Adrian's* hand is on my upper arm, and his arm is supporting my back.]

Even though I kind of hate Terri, I feel like you should have a little one- shot or a spin off story where he and Terri get together! Maybe he only beat up Adrian because he was jelous?

loved it!

YOU THERE!

Can you write more slash story? Pleeaseee? cough/sequel/cough

Anyway, Adrian is so cute. I want to pinch his cheeks. Can I? Can I? On the first few chapters, I kinda hated Kian cause he's an asshole. But now, I ADORE HIM! He's so protective of Adrian, and it's so sweet! I hated Eric at first too, cause he dated Kian, but now I think he's just an air-headed. lol. Adrian should have let Erik kill Terri. In fact, he should help him hide the body XD

This story is definitely my favorite! It's adorable and full of fluffiness :D oh, and is it too late to vote for a sequel? This story sooo deserved a sequel. You should definitely do it!

Loved this, so awesome, and really cute _ i'm soooo in love the characters :)

Amazing story

Is A bi-polar? I mean one moment it is father the next it is daddy, all the spaing out he does and him being mature and childish at the same time. Dont get me wrong I love the dude and I love the story. If im wrong about A Im sorry.

So freaking cute.

Oh my. I don't... I just... I think I finished this in 2 days? I couldn't stop reading, it was so friggin addicting!

Really good writing and I love your characters

I cried reading this story. I'm glad it has a happy ending. If not sequel, can you write a spin-off? about Erik maybe? or can you write short stories about Adrian and Kian life afterwards? I'd like to check on them, making sure they're still OK :D

Good job. please keep writing YY