Reviews for 30 Haiku |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable. Keep it up so I won't have to limit how many I review. Once I run out, I'll need more to look forward to. I love your moments. As Always, Eve |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite a different feel from the others so far, huh? Beautiful, nevertheless. As Always, Eve |
![]() ![]() ![]() This really makes me want to start taking pictures again so I might be able to capture the moments in these Haikus...fabulous. As Always, Eve |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one just creates the perfect picture of the glistening sky. Wonderful. As Always, Eve |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple, but hauntingly powerful. Keep it up. As Always, Eve |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is great! I love the last line. Write on! ~Anna~ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'the smell of summer' in the first line had an interesting word choice, the smell, when i read that, it's almost like i was smelling a sour orange. weird i like how this haiku is 'bright' |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great! the use of onomatopoeia here made it sound nice when reading it out loud. i loved the second line, and the last line was a good conclusion. yay, loved it X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked the first line, the nice ring to it. but i think if you explain the haiku further, or rephrase it, it would be much better cuz the wording is good but the menaing is sorta lost in the process. ES~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love these! cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is a really good peotic discription of the sounds of the flute |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good:) fountain-wishing does give hapiness |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the metaphor, or is it a simile? i think it is a metaphor. of the cherry to summer:) it is really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Sad! |