Reviews for 30 Haiku
Eve Amare chapter 5 . 3/10/2010
Adorable. Keep it up so I won't have to limit how many I review. Once I run out, I'll need more to look forward to. I love your moments.

As Always,

Eve
Eve Amare chapter 4 . 3/10/2010
Quite a different feel from the others so far, huh? Beautiful, nevertheless.

As Always,

Eve
Eve Amare chapter 3 . 3/10/2010
This really makes me want to start taking pictures again so I might be able to capture the moments in these Haikus...fabulous.

As Always,

Eve
Eve Amare chapter 2 . 3/10/2010
This one just creates the perfect picture of the glistening sky. Wonderful.

As Always,

Eve
Eve Amare chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Simple, but hauntingly powerful. Keep it up.

As Always,

Eve
Princess-anna57 chapter 10 . 10/21/2009
Wow this is great! I love the last line. Write on!

~Anna~ _
Eternal Skies chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
'the smell of summer' in the first line had an interesting word choice, the smell, when i read that, it's almost like i was smelling a sour orange. weird

i like how this haiku is 'bright'
Eternal Skies chapter 2 . 10/12/2009
this was great! the use of onomatopoeia here made it sound nice when reading it out loud.

i loved the second line, and the last line was a good conclusion. yay, loved it X3
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
i liked the first line, the nice ring to it. but i think if you explain the haiku further, or rephrase it, it would be much better cuz the wording is good but the menaing is sorta lost in the process.

ES~
Erica Jo chapter 11 . 9/30/2009
i love these! cant wait for more!
xxmorethanthisxx chapter 2 . 8/28/2009
great!
xxmorethanthisxx chapter 11 . 8/28/2009
that is a really good peotic discription of the sounds of the flute
xxmorethanthisxx chapter 8 . 8/28/2009
very good:)

fountain-wishing does give hapiness
xxmorethanthisxx chapter 3 . 8/28/2009
i love the metaphor, or is it a simile? i think it is a metaphor. of the cherry to summer:) it is really good
Little Miss Cullen Cutie chapter 11 . 8/26/2009
Aw. Sad!
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