Reviews for Grim Reaper at burger king
MysticGypsyGirl chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Lmao That was really cute! I especially loved the part, “Do you know how expensive it is to get full body robes dry-cleaned these days?” I thought that it was a great story and I’d love to see you write more like this!
Sir Pebbles chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Hahaha. "See you in a month." P That's just like that Simpsons episode, how Homer's talking to God, wanting to know the meaning of life and how he can't wait 'till he's dead, and God's like, "You can't wait six months?" Bahaha.

I liked how the Grim Reaper was complaining about dry-cleaning his clothes. I woulda loved to see a "Quiet, or I'll kill you!" threat, but this was good just the same. :)
Jmichael11 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
I really like the concept. A story can always use more detail. I'm actually typing this in my creative writing class, and she gets on us for adding detail, making her "see" it in her mind. Also, sentence structure is a little weird in places. In general, though, I really like this.
IntoxicatedCirculation-xo chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
This was just absolutely hilarious! :)