Reviews for The Night Light
Aerwiya chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
This was a pretty good poem. Vivid was a good word to choose for the last line. Keep up the writing!
marsmarionette chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Very pretty! I was a little confused when you said "but only for this shift" because you started saying the sun only goes for the shift, but then the moon will be back soon. Then you said "only keeping me company" and say "we" right after... Anyway, other than that I really liked it.