I really enjoyed the story. Devon's wild side is awesome and though Damien is creepy I'm sure there is a reason for it. I look forward to the next chapter and future lovey-dovey scenes with Kenba, he sounds like he needs it lol. Hope you update soon.

Happy Writing,

~Shik

.GOD THAT WAS AWESOME

*pouts*

you better not take as long in updating, especially since you ended it like that.

Umm, yeah, still liking this and looking forward to reading more and seeing Kenba have his happy ending, or at least his not-so-unhappy ending.

this is really good, i love it. issabellas a meanie why dose she have to ruin things its not fair. any ways please update soon

I'm not sure how I feel about Isabella returning. I guess it'll depend on how the next few chapters turn out. I figured there had to be an inside man involved with what Isabella did, and I'm not surprised it turned out to be Curtis and Samantha. Samantha is really stupid though...she'll never get Kenba now. Not that she could've gotten him before.

I really enjoyed this chapter. Update as soon as you can.

Alright wel first thing is first: The chapter doesn't seem unbetaed so good job there...

Now the next order of business WHAT THE HELL?1? I was so into this story and I loved it and then this cliffy comes up! and so now I'm staring at my screen in shock and horror wishing my eyes were deceiving me that there really WAS a next chapter but really there isn't and it angers/saddens me! GRAWR! lol sorry anyways love your story... even with all the cliffys heheh . I'm sort of hoping that they called others to help via mind.. or the others will come because they sense some thing up... or at least Devon decides to scream for back up or SOMETHING to get someone else to come over and help... Since, you know... they're outnumbered... and something wicked awful happened last time any of the three were on screen... can't imagine why Sam would side with them though... seems to have a strong connection with the fam.. or more like Kenba... then again she might be thinking that if she can't have him no one can... or something... but really we need some back up... and possibly some fire arms to help to make sure everything DOESN'T go to sh*t... *cough* excuse my language lol anyways thanks for the up! *whimper* even though it has a cliffy D haha Thanks! till next time! D - *waves* (-),

wow epic chapter. really amazing. Isabella. evil! I kill her. Update soon. I really want to see what happens next (and hope Kenba kills Isabella)

OMG, I LOVE THIS STORY- PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!

This story is amazingg:)

What's this? What's this? Quite the satisfactory ending to the chapter I would say. I'll be honest. You lost me a little before the middle. I had a hard time seperating your thoughts from one another. It's as if your ideas clashed a little to hard there right around where Curtis and Sam show up. Try to make yourself clearer possibly by shorting your sentences. It'll help you be more direct. Just a thought and absolutely not a critique.

I'm loving the hunt. It's absolutely beautifully written.

Keep up the excellent work.

Can't wait to read more as always.

I'm feeling lots of love towards the whole family that I can no longer pick out my favorite from.

I really love this story, and the triplets. They are awesome. I wish i knew what they were saying though, my spanish fucking sux. Lol but i cant wait for the next chap, please dont take forever.

EXCELLENT work here! Loved it!

what? isabella appeared? i guess i know why she appeared. samantha wants to get kenba and curtis want to get devon.

.god, that was fricking awesome, wow i'm just... wow, loved it,i mean i knew Curtis and Samantha were up to something but i was that thinking that at all, just when i thought i could predict this story tou throw a curve ball in there. i can't wait to see how it pans out. i don't mind clffies i just don't like when we have to wait really long for and update on the cliffy, so please update soon.

I dont care what Sam and Curtis are doing with Isabella as long as they all die! Go kenba! Happy to see updates again. )