Whew! Been waiting a while to review again. Ok, dealing with our authors note, yes alaska is beautiful, I know I was born there, yes vacations rock, but to the fans, they suck. I know that because I am currently in arkansas on vacation. Dealing with the story ( sorry this is so long!) I think it's pretty obvoious what Isabella is doing there, u pretty much gave it away when Samantha Took in devons scent, sorry if that's mean! About the beta thing, I personally think betas are overated, I've done my entire story wihout I think your doing pretty good without one!

I love it. Please write again soon.

LOVED. IT. OMG that was intense, the drama the pain the undieung love of familY, AND THEN TO END IT WITH such humour, (hah) your best chap to date and that's saying something cause the others were bad ass. now if u will just update regularly, hmm, newats till next update.

I.O.U 1 good descriptive comment on chapter 12.

I got no complaints for now. xp

ps Love the detailed explanations. Love the confusing switch from thought to speach. Passionately in love with the idea of the game and where the story line is going. Can't wait to read more.

With lots of yaoi love.

Your imouto.

hehe update soon I want to see how this turns out (chuckles evilly). That Brookes and Isabella incident is incredibly tragic. Yikes. Bet they made a big impact on the 'family' Update soon!

This story takes forever

how can chapters kick your um... butt? how? tell me

Thomas' character never gets old, I love him:)

It's sad what happend with their family in the past.

I wonder is Samanthat and Curtis are like Brookes and Isabella?

I can't wait for the next update and thanks for writing such an amazing story:)

This brought bad memories, horrible all of them. I'm alright now.

Brookes and Isabella are hoes. I hope they die.

I wonder how Devon will fare in the "contest".

Where is Hassan and Kenba's mother?

Let the Games begin! Can't WAIT!

Wonderful chapter. It really brought all the characters and events so far together. I LOVE Milo. What a cutie. I was confused about his childish way of speaking, him being so old, but now I understand.

I didn't think there was too much gore. This IS a were story after all. Besides, we're all adults, we can handle a bit of gore and sex. Seriously, don't worry about stuff like that.

Thanks for the update!

INCREDIBLE chapter! I was confused about the update, I was like 'I'm pretty sure I read this one before' but THIS chapter, oh man, this one was epic! Great work!

So glad that this story is continuing, was worried you stopped it, but why do i have a feeling Milo's mommy will be coming back. hm. Update soon.

Have you posted his chaper befroe?

I know ive already read it.

I'm super excited this story was updated! I'm little confused though, did you have chapter 11 up and the just add more too it? A lot in here seem familiar, like Thomas changing, meeting Shannon, and then meeting Hasan at the end? Maybe I'm just have no idea what I'm talking about, good chapter anyway.

i really like this story, i hope u keep writing