So the shouting match was terrifying and depressing, but everything else was great. I feel as though they probably have a bunch of ups and downs in their relationships based on that one screaming match. Or their relationship is manic depressive. The highs are extraordinary, and the lows are like hell. There are a whole bunch of funny lines that I can't even begin to list them off. And I found a few grammar errors, but pfft. Not worth mentioning. This was well written and lovely and etc. Luck with writing and life and yada yada.
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adorable! i loved it!

That was so sweet!:D

This is adorable and so are Patrick and Owen :)

SO cute. Just-just adorable. I was searching for multi-chapter stories and clicked on this oneshot anyway simply for the title. Boy am I glad I did. xD They are so cute together. I love this.

You did the challenge thing twice. I mean, you had two journeys - three hours lost in Disneyland to get to Indiana Jones, and three years of boyfriendness for Patrick and Owen. It totally counts as a journey that started and ended, because now it's like they're married... kinda... well, not really. So maybe that one is more like a three year journey that didn't really end yet. Either way. I loved it. I was squealing through this entire story.

Umm could they get anymore ADORABLE! I mean really now they're both so cute! :) and I have to say I loved how you got them to get past the fastpass line by allowing them to do something they probably really really wanted to do in the first place. Lol. So clever. Top notch story I do say! Now I'll have to look into your other ones when I get the time. :)

These two are adorable. xD

wait so these "people" r gay right?

Aw, that was so cute! Great job!

Oh my God. This is so completely adorable. I literally cannot decide if I like Owen or Patrick more. And your whole bit about Patrick trying to outsmart Owen about the stuff that he "doesn't want to do" is hysterical.

And the whole fight, especially once you know what it's for, actually manages to be cute and intense at the same time, while still being realistic...

AND there's a perfect ending.

Well. I think you've figured out that I like it. No. Love it.

I'm going to go now, because otherwise I'll ramble for a ridiculous amount of time and you'll get bored. But I've read some of your other stuff, and will be coming back to review, because I feel bad for leaving such awesomeness unreviewed.

Oh my goodness!

that was actually so adorably cute!

seriously xD ek.

Love it!

*passed out from cuteness overload* Awesome, just, awesome. Aww, I melted a bit. Yay for Disneyland and LoTR (you managed to put those together, somehow, wow!).

aw. :D

omg, i was just sitting down to try and write up a story for this challenge... and one of my characters' names is Owen. XD gah

put that one back in the box for now, i guess. LOL

anyway... how cute ;3;