Reviews for Tears
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
Love especially the fourth, seventh, and eighth stanza, as well as those lines: "Mounding it up… In your empty shell of a heart… Making you feel slightly more complete… Alive and loved." Deep poem, hits home. Beautifully written too, I can really see this as a song.

Thank you for sharing!
3M2R chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Wow, this is deep. I love the second,eleventh and last stanza. Esp the second.

The eleventh, I love the last two lines most. it rings SO true.

'Making you feel slightly more complete,

alive and loved'

The last, it's because it is first person point of view so yeah.. It's naturally more attention grabbing.

And Hi! I'm one of those too (:

But writing is my only resort as tears are too tough to drop. If I drop a tear, people would has a trillion questions, if I speak a line, they won't even care. So Yeah, I'd stick to writing. Silent vault of emotions. (:
Perfectly Mythical chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Chouette! That's quite a cool poem/song.

I saw your profile saying you'll never regret reading this or something like that and decided to see who you were
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"Just a single drop

Can speak a thousand words

And just one word

Can flow a thousand drops"

I really liked that part, this is a really nice piece!
NineteenxStars chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
i really really liked this!

especially:

They fall everlasting

Not from the eyes

But from the most delicate hearts

so sweet. my favorite line is "they're a river of human weakness"

wow you are really very talented! write on!
SoMeOnEsToLeMyPeN chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Wow, you have a very amazing talent. This is beautifully written. Lovely poem!
Orphina chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Beautiful :')
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
I love this poem. And I love the song version of it too :P Come on Debbie, this is awesome!