|Reviews for DELICIOUS|
| It's 2016 chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
| Mysticmagiclove chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
first of all, this is AMAZING!
idk if u have a wattpad account, or somethign but i found a story with a VERY similar plot and concept
just thought u should know just in case...
| Julietish chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: "Franz now knew what he looked like when having an orgasm."
This line is what made me fall in love this this one-shot. Quotes like this were abundant in DELICIOUS, which may be why it has 277 reviews. With just over 3,000 words, this is easily one of the most adorable one-shots I've ever read, and definitely one of my favorites.
It's about a girl named Franz who is a very gifted baker. She brings brownies to her biology class, and one of the most popular guys in school-who tells Franz to call him Ferdinand-enjoys them maybe a little too much, declaring his love for Franz after just a few short exchanges. His "feelings" only grow as she brings him more and more desserts, proposing to her multiple times over the three days this story spans.
DELICIOUS is very fluffy. I was smiling and laughing and aww-ing throughout the whole thing. I only spotted a few mistakes, but there might have been more that I overlooked because I was so enamoured by the story. Franz was likable and realistic. She doesn't fall for Ferdinand the second he smiles at her, but she does admit that he is very attractive. He's lovable, too. He's popular, yes, but not a stereotype; he treats everyone the same way. He's funny and kind and so amazing to Franz. DELICIOUS is a seriously adorable story-it made me wish it would happen to me. I just need to learn how to bake...
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
now I have to learn to bake brownies
| BlackHare9 chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
kyaaa I wish I bked
| Artemis chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
I love this. Best thing I've read all week.
| Grespitchied chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
The guys kinda annoying but cute hahahaha
| Percabethgirl2645 chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
Awwww, adorable :).
| AmericanPeanut chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Well then. x'D Very well written. I've said that a lot today, but it's true! Obviously, favorite-ing.
| BelieveInTheUnbelievable1 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
I have read this story 57 times. Seriously, I'm not exaggerating, not kidding. I FREAKING LOVE IT SO MUCH 33
| Caroline chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
This was really cute!
| raeofshimmeringsunshine chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Aw, this was so sweet! I really enjoyed the Franz/Ferdinand dynamic, and I thought the baked goods were such a great hook. Great job!
| Art7Freak chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
That was so incredible, you don't even know. I am so tempted to learn how to cook well and see what will happen. Well done!
| Why-do-I-need-a-username chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
OH MY GOSH I LAUGHED SO HARD I AM GOING TO DIE! HHEHEHEHEHEHEHE HAHAHAHAHAHAH!XP
| So1Thought chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
This is freaking hilarious.
I have this image of multiple Thors, only, you know, teenaged and with different hair colours.