Reviews for spring
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Very hopeful and very beautiful. I love the newness that it you bring into this poem. Its absolutely beautiful and truly brings the hope and newness of spring to life. Very talented.
axis.on.a.tilt chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
I adore the short stanzas, the simplicity of your words, your use of italics for the ending.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I like the second line a lot. That descriptions was unique and well done. The rest of descriptions in those first two stanzas created the picture well too. But what really made the piece great is that last stanza. It made such a great point and was so unexpected. Really great job.

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NicoleLautore chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Gorgeous

"with sunshine on her pale lips"

beautiful line