|Reviews for An Odd Sense of Deja Vu|
| Matt Hayes chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
wow this was a very detailed story. surprised but happy to find out its fake. But I was really causght up in the story wondering what would happen next. you have a talent
| Vegetarian Serial Killer chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Forgot to say: Courtesy of the Review Game.
| FuckMeAlice chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I liked the non-excessive repetition of 'I remember'. It eases one into the story quite easily, and got me into the mood of the piece.
But I do object strongly to this sentence:
'Until, nine months later, I am staring up into the miniature face of my rapist.'
Usuallt I don't object to writing, but I think that this unfairly faults the child. The way that it's written makes me think that you're trying to get some sort of dramatic impact here, but it's not dramatic; it's rather cheap, in fact. Could you change it?
| Chuken Hachiko chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
You NEED to continue this. It's amazing and just screaming to be continued.
| Tenrai Koi chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
The guy iz an idiot and he needs to be killed...uh...anyway i think itz good cuz well...ur a good writer,lol. and uh...yea so um...hi!
Oh and guess wut?
I'm sitting right next to you at this very moment,LMFAO!