to be honest, I've never taken the time to actually write a review but something about the images you happened to weave have inspired me. I fell in love with the image of Neely's color suddenly dripping off and she's left "whiter than innocence." the pure fantasy of the whole thing makes me smile. I like that its not set in some dull highschool but this fantastical world of possibility. i dont even have anything terrible to say, your words blended perfectly to create this sense of mystery and intrigue. i hope the rest of this story doesnt disappoint and manages to continue weaving more glorious images

sparkles, unicorns and best regards,

wittylass13

Third time in saying: LOVELY.

Lovely again.

This is stunningly beautiful.

I love how anything can happen in your world- it makes me see EVERYTHING differently. For instance, if I was neely the wolf in my poster might howl when feeling lonely and the air might feel bad about being too cold. My skin color wouldn't matter anymore and maybe I would find my true love. HOLY Jumbalaya! Please please update! Your story is like a dream; almost too good to be true and perfectly strange. :D

Goodness...your story is amazing. I'm speechless. I found it from the SKoW homepage as a winner for Most Creative, and I completely agree with the judge who chose you. :)

I really loved the scene in Neely's room. I can barely imagine what a world of charcoal drawings must be like. When I read your story, I see beautiful pictures in my head, and I'm not a very creative person, mind you. I think you're a genius to have come up with such an interesting plot...

I know that you haven't updated in more than a year, but I hope that you take the time to come back to this story because it's a winner. :)

pls update soon!

HOLLA.

'Grats on finding a beta - especially such a gloriously awesome-tastic one. Here's to hoping she whips you into shape so you actually finish this story, mkay? Speaking of the story: Neely's room was really (fucking awesome. but how the fuck did they step into her drawings , is this like anything goes land or does this bitch have special powers...) and I'm supah curious about what's going to happen with dresden and how he keeps going on about being the villain. Is he going to like fuck up her wish and kill her or something? I kindasorta hated when I read that she's his first wishpass person or whatever and the fact that they're liking another already though. Also, you should know, every chapter I wait for Dresden to reveal his true intentions and tell her what the eff he is (a sort of more detailed explanation... like other than the fact that he weirdly gives suicidal people wishes.) .

Go update fast nao, kk?

(BO . YOU FAILED AT UPDATING FAST.)

but I still shall wait...

i like it. Are youplanning on touching on those deep issues of how our parents mess us up?

I was sad that it only has four chapters so far...i want more...like right now ... :)

please update soon...now...

im guessing he wished for the same thing she did when he got his ticket to happiness...

was Dresden hoping she was going to wish he could stay with her forever?

im loving it. you writing reminds me a lot of the style in alice in wonderland if that was you intention you have succeeded if not then...

This is beautiful(:

Please continue soon. I cannot even begin to fathom this amazing piece. It almost made me cry.

so this needs an update or eight. purty please. i'm pretty much in love with this story nolies.

I just read your story and it is ahmazzingg! I can see why you won a SKOW award!