Reviews for Spilled Milk
The Loved And Unloved chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
So true. I like this(:
LyricLingo chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
This was really good.

It sounded like the person was wanting to kill themself, but they hinted around it. They didn't just say it.

I really liked this(:
HarryGinnyDxC chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Woah, deep. Very awesome!
XxNoImaginationxX chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
The poem brought together two well known things, a common phrase and emotion, that would normally not be expected to suit but in this style and setting, they go together really well. This is a feeling I have often experienced and you have put it into words extremely well. There's no complicated language, just short, simple and really effective. It's hard to believe you've only been writing for a short time, you seem to have a talent for this.
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Aww:( Sad, but beautifully written. I love the repetition. It really helps drive your point home and makes it flow. Great job:) Write on!
BlackRosesFreedom chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Beautiful and really sad. Again, I like it.

RosePetal
JGPoetry chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I like the repetition and the short one-liners. It's an interesting concept. :)
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
i can feel the bitterness behind the words, depressing, sad, but deep..
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Love the comparasions, and the shorts lines, just all the ways of putting "get rid of me" and "this is what I am", it was sad but I really liked it. :D

Rolliepollie44
Natural and fake beauty chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Brilliant. you say you havent been writing very long. you have to be joking. because boy are you a natural.