Reviews for A Shell
XxNoImaginationxX chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I really like this poem. I creates good imagery, get straight to the point. It gives the sense of being very emotionless and distant, just the way one would be after having their heart broken. It's brief yet detailed enough that the length is unimportant. Anyways, that's just my interpretation. Really good )
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
I like the imagery that comes out in this one, and just calling it an empty shell, it really leads on great emotion in the poem, and I like just how it's like short lines so that it's just kind of swift clips of imagery and then you're on to the next one. Lovely. :D

Rolliepollie44
Natural and fake beauty chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
i can relate to this. i feel like this sometimes. and i tottally feel like an emptie shell.