Reviews for Eternal
LotusGrave chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Okay the good: I love it! It has a really good plot so far, I can not wait to read the next chapter. The writing is extraordinary.

The bad: The beginning confused me. It was hard to get into it. But all good authors have a few problems. Besides I have learned that all GOOD books start out a bit rough but end really well.

Skittles and M&Ms

-Savy-
NebulasResolution chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
thats awesome for a school assignment.