I like it alot! It feels different and somehow melancholy. :)

I'll be waiting for more poetry from you.

Lots of love,hugs n kisses

...Wow, that was a deep poem, it was sad, but a kind of romantic sad, one that is strangely refreshing. It was descriptive and meaningful, which are two of my favorite aspects of poems. Great work, definitely on my favorites.

Nice job, and keep writing!

Durandel