Reviews for S
Amethystars chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I love the rhythm and flow of this piece, with the repetition and simple word choices that make up a powerful message nevertheless.
Demyx Lover chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Lovely. I like the S's beginning each line.
the meaning of life chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I LOVE IT! It just captured me. I love repetition in poems and this provides the perfect balance in repetition, because some people do it too much. I really like it!
irenethewriter chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
This is extremely well done. Sad poems and I have a love/hate relationship because I hate being sad (like most people, lol) but this is also so good. And wow, you have so many poems! Do you have a book of poetry published yet?
Isca chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I like the repetition of "it's late." This line connects the 's' sound (of sleep) to the idea of 'suicide' very well. :)
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Sad and powerful, I really liked it. Might sound silly, but the title was creative! And i really liked the way you bolded each S in She and then it ended up the S was for suicide! D
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Very sad, but well done!