|Reviews for Crush|
| dreamerwaybeyondtheclouds chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
god ur friends sound like mine do now! XD good story btw
| xoLOVEmeWITHnoRESTRICTIONSxo chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Aw, it's cute.
| totallyred chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
[This review is for the REVIEW MARATHON ! ]
Aww... It's really cute. And I think it would be better if it was in the poems section.
Anyway... I like how you put your thought about him every after a paragraph. It makes me feel like you are really thinking about him... and it also reminds me of 'those days'!
Although, it would be much better if you described the characters more. It's hard not to imagine what the people in the story look like...
| Atreyu Legend chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Funny story actually reminds me of when I was that age, not many mistakes to point out so I'll compliment, I like that you separated paragraphs every time someone new spoke it allowed me to keep up with what was going on. If you'd like you could read my stories I'm trying to get reviews because I have none haha.