Reviews for The Blemish of Perfection
barreq chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
haha, love the 2 last lines!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Hahaha, I like this piece because it makes a really great piece. The only thing I didn't get was referencing that the person is a Christian. I'm not sure how that is really relevant. I like the last line because it's so unexpected that perfection is a flaw, but I can definitely understand how that could be.

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senseofhumor81 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I hear ya! Why do you think I did a poem called 'My Take on Society" I don't like their rules never ever ever LOL! Good poem though. Even though I am a Christian myself but I can't help but laugh at the part 'Stupid Christian' LOL! I thought it was funny :)

Good job! It tells all of us that nobody is perfect and no matter how many times you try to fix your face or any parts of your body, you are still imperfect! Love it!