Reviews for Clocks
TheVillanelle chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
This would be really good if it weren't for the middle line in each stanza. It just seems really awkward, and doesn't fit.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Villanelles are fun. And really hard, because the whole rhyming aspect can come across as forced if you're not careful. Your rhymes, though, came across as completely natural, which definitely heightened the appeal of this poem.