Reviews for Untitled
alwaysautumn chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
hey!

I like the direction of the story, though some adjectives seemed to be thrown in there. I can understand the importance of the use of vocab. in one of those tests- but for readers here you might want to put it in the context of your audience on this site. If people don't know what you're going on about- the meaning of your story is lost. And being writers- we're all about communication :) I can't wait to see what happens next! I want to read more, good job so far!

x reeka
Aerwiya chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Yeah, gotta love those random stories teachers make you write. This is pretty good. It makes me wonder what exactly happened before. Keep writing!