|Reviews for Hate Saying Goodbye|
| Keree chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
In the words of (or I think it was this movies words...) the movie Signs "There is no such thing as coincidences; everything happens for a reason."
This is wrote very well. It stays on one topic and doesn't go off the track like most of mine do. fav lines:
"I spend most of my days
Walking be your side,
Sharig your best moments,
| lisagal chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
m... the rythm is good :) and the words give me a feel of some frustration. nice work! :D
Keep moving forward _
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
I like it but the ending bugged me a little i guess. you can't always be together sleep is important. but cute poem i love the message your conveying _
| yumyumSUSHI chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
NA absolutely sweet ! ))
| FuckMeAlice chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I really like the whole idea of this poem. It shows how hungry one gets for love, and how all the love in the world can never be enough.
I don't think I like how the end is sort of unbalanced from the beginning, though. There's a bit too much negative stuff in the end, and it overwhelms the happier stuff at the beginning.
-Stardust, courtesy of the Review Marathon (link in my profile).