| Reviews for Show Me Your Fangs |
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   StatikLillium chapter 4 . 10/19/2011 This story was awesome...what happened? |
| supervirgin chapter 4 . 6/12/2010 the story needs to be writen faster! |
| XxShadowDancerxX chapter 4 . 7/1/2009 O.o I like this! I can't wait for the next chappy! Keep up the good work! Update soon! |
| Kanan chapter 4 . 6/29/2009 Wow, wow, wow! Love it! Please update soon! |
| Kanan chapter 1 . 6/24/2009 Wow, love your humor! Very fun read...will read more when I got the time. |
| Tryst713 chapter 4 . 6/18/2009 Yes! I'm so relieved for an update! So, River has a hilarious thought process, and Caleb only maximizes the homicidal tendencies - nice! The first part of the chapter was totally twisted, I loved it. But sad about the dog, I must admit! Can't wait for more! Lot's of exclamation points, sorry if it's a little unnerving... |
| overlordpotatoe chapter 4 . 6/18/2009 This is great and getting better! I really loved knife guy, or rather, how you did the scene with knife guy. It was really effectively creepy. I'm also intrigued about River now, with the "he knew what they'd done to him." I know your beta! She's my bitch! |
| Ashvarden chapter 4 . 6/18/2009 Oh, I love this story! Awesome chapter, especially the banter between River-Caleb and Dillion-James. Very well done. I liked how Dillion was like totally creeped out by the shadows and footsteps and everything on his way home, too. Was it the vampire that followed him back to his apartment, or were the stalker-footsteps really just a figment of his imagination? |
| Ashvarden chapter 3 . 5/3/2009 Interesting start! I love River's sarcasm and his hatred towards people and vampires and just the world in general. :D Great work setting things up, too, I really liked how you started things off from Vynn's point of view and then switched over to River's. Great work, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Wanabet chapter 3 . 4/29/2009 Lmao. I like River. |
| SerenHybrid chapter 1 . 4/23/2009 Oh, interesting! Slightly hooked, can't wait for more! (Does it make me a dirty person if I read the "Something was jabbed hard against his stomach" line and saw 'click' as something entirely different for a second?) I really liked the voice of Vynn, and the sudden change in the boy's demeanour, it came across really well, very realistic. There are a couple of typos, but if this is your first story that's to be expected! Keep up the good work! |
| Lianneaka your lover mwhaha chapter 1 . 4/20/2009 Amazing! I loved how it was definitely exciting, fast paced, descriptive but not overly descriptive to the point I believe you just had word vomit all over your keyboard! XP. I loved it! And you thought I wouldn't like it at all. Can't wait to read more of your stuff sunshine! |
| JerryOnigiri chapter 3 . 4/20/2009 Thanks for the update! This was a fun chapter. I can't wait to read more. |
| Tryst chapter 3 . 4/19/2009 I like it! haha, your story is interesting - from the story line to the characters and their humor! |
| DefineNightmare chapter 3 . 4/19/2009 Lol, Ten buck he'll shoot him? I double that! update sooN! PLEASE |