|Reviews for Sera Angel|
| gold against the soul chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I like your use of archaic sentence structure - it's odd but strangely musical. The same goes for the whole of this first chapter, particuarly the rather poetic bit in which you describe the garments made of whitesilver, there are some really satisfying words there. An alluring beginning, I shall presently read on...