|Reviews for Kingdom under Pressure|
| PencilSketchS chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
:) I didn't notice that Aldred had another story, a bit of history for the character. I still love him to bits. I like Arthur too. This feels a bit incomplete though. Is there more coming soon? I'll check if you've written more about him tomorrow.
| Tears of IceFire chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I like the concept, though I wish I could figure out what Aldred was doing! It does get a little confusing with all the sons, but that can't really be avoided.
Oh, I just wanted to point out..."tend to him all the tend" I think the second tend was supposed to be...time? Unless I'm missing something.
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