|Reviews for Nowena, Comanche girl|
| pille-ip chapter 3 . 9/9/2013
Amazing story! Update soon!
| Atatakai chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
An EXCELLENT writing. It was very easy to see everything in the mind's eye. Thank you for sharing it.
| Buxton the Blue Cat chapter 3 . 10/8/2010
Its an impressive story but I still get confused about the girl herself. I know she is a white-taught girl but it seems strange and stilted to hear her thinking Indian thoughts about the wild, the hunt and the seasons in terms we are more familiar with - the years by numbers, the seasons by months and so on. It does enrich the reading though because its such an unusual view to have in a western story at all.
One constructive comment I might have - mainly because its something I have hit myself in my own novel - is that it is screamingly difficult to write a believable female role if you happen to be a male author! That is made even more difficult here since she is a cross-cultural character involved in two cultures, neither of which I am particularly at home with. In your position I would - and in fact did - go and grab someone female and in as near as possible to the real situation that you are describing. For me, that was easy since I needed a female police officer. How you would find someone like our little commanche girl is difficult to imagine!
| Eveningskyy chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Awesome Cref. Your story kept me coming back and read it to the end. Very good detail and story telling. Please let me know when you have more online!
| sumrandomgirl XD chapter 2 . 10/18/2009
this is awesome! i love it. cant wait till nxt chapter:)
| juddlegirl chapter 2 . 7/27/2009
I like this little girl!
| juddlegirl chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
You are really good at making it long. I like the story line, it is interesting and kept me reading.