Reviews for Nowena, Comanche girl |
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![]() ![]() excellent , totaly enjoyed it. fiction but reads like non fiction very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You can broaden your audience by publishing your story on NovelStar Mobile App. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() An EXCELLENT writing. It was very easy to see everything in the mind's eye. Thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() Its an impressive story but I still get confused about the girl herself. I know she is a white-taught girl but it seems strange and stilted to hear her thinking Indian thoughts about the wild, the hunt and the seasons in terms we are more familiar with - the years by numbers, the seasons by months and so on. It does enrich the reading though because its such an unusual view to have in a western story at all. One constructive comment I might have - mainly because its something I have hit myself in my own novel - is that it is screamingly difficult to write a believable female role if you happen to be a male author! That is made even more difficult here since she is a cross-cultural character involved in two cultures, neither of which I am particularly at home with. In your position I would - and in fact did - go and grab someone female and in as near as possible to the real situation that you are describing. For me, that was easy since I needed a female police officer. How you would find someone like our little commanche girl is difficult to imagine! |
![]() ![]() Awesome Cref. Your story kept me coming back and read it to the end. Very good detail and story telling. Please let me know when you have more online! |
![]() ![]() this is awesome! i love it. cant wait till nxt chapter:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this little girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are really good at making it long. I like the story line, it is interesting and kept me reading. |