|Reviews for Masquerade|
| NearlyPrescient chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
interesting piece. the second sentence is very thought-provoking.
is it suggesting that people will have a shallow focus on the face and superficiality instead of the heart if the face is revealed?
| SuzannaR chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
This one's interesting too. Somehow I like the way it flows, it's easy to read.
I don't get its meaning as clear as the previous one though.
How does taking it off conceal the heart (I really like the concept of this, wearing a mask to hide the face, and perhaps the heart too?) but I don't see how taking it off conceals the heart?
Also I didn't like the word conceal there...I know that haiku is a syllable thing? So I guess it fits there in terms of that, but it sounds strange there to me.
Interesting though :)
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| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Haikus aren't my typical style for reading, but I really like this one, excellent work.