Reviews for Dream On |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so freaking cute. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() love love love love!~~ so cute |
![]() ![]() that was cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was looking forward to smuttiness! But still, totally cool, if only my dream catcher would catch me a dreamy man xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolutely adorable! I liked how you kep Mirage's personality consistent, and of course the ending was [retty nice too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say this is one of my favorites from your one-shot batches. The creativity with this could be taken so far that I wish I could adopt the idea and make a multi-chapter story for this(which I'm highly tempted to beg you for haha). Though I wonder if you got this idea on your own or got inspiration from another book? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! that was pretty cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must have boring dreams because my dream catcher never catches anything this interesting! I like this line: Then one night he woke up sweating. It took him a moment to realize it wasn't with fear, but he glared blurrily at the glowing figure across the room anyway. "I thought you couldn't haunt my dreams anymore," he said. If Mirage had really thought about it, then he would have known the answer to his questions a lot earlier. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cute, and original. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Who are you?" Archer asked, scratching at his slightly greasy hair. "I'm your worst nightmare," the trapped man snapped. "Oh," Archer said. "It worked." "You're just going to name me 'dream' in another language? That's creative." "You speak French?" Archer asked. "Great, then you can help me with my French homework." HA HA. oh, the love. and i just about collapsed at the end when he isn't tricked, but knows all along in his own way, and that last line? is brilliant. marry me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, now if only all of our nightmares could end in such a pleasant fashion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad nightmares don't end that well in real life... Loved this. It was so original! ...and now I'm going to look at my dream-catchers a whole new way XD And again, love the ending. So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good i really liked it. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. That nightmare wanted him for quite some time. So the question is: do nightmare haunt you because they are interested, like children teasing each other on the playground? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow awesome xD..I want me a dream catcher |