So, here I am again. This time I'm on my fifth reading of this story, and I've gotta say... It's still just as amazing five years later. 3

This is one of my favourites! Honestly, the pace, the way it was written, everything was great! I'm glad though that I read this once it was all completed, I'd have died waiting TWO YEARS FOR IT ALL MY GOLLY! I didn't realize I forgot to leave a review when I was finished the first time but this story just sticks to me and I can't get over it. It truly was a job well done!

Great story. Wonderful characters and setting. I love the way you paced the story. You took it slow and steady. Although I'm a little irk with Kieran. I didn't support/agree with her reason for leaving. Obviously, leave or not leaving would hurt, but in my case I'll try not to leave and choose to fight the problem together with the person I love. But Kieran choose otherwise. Maybe its Kieran's personality that lead her to that decision. She's just perfect. You create this character whose so good with everything that she seems to accept to carry the world on her own shoulder. For that I may take away my bite against Kieran.

And it is Julian the snitch? Somebody confirm this please.

I will never get over how much I love this story. I'm on my third reading. 3

I look forward to reading more from you, when you get the time. You have a gift.

Great story...loved it.

Hahaha...so funny

I absolutely like the idea of not jump in the lesbian relationship between the two so fast.
These chapters were great so far.
im forwarded to read more.

Amazing story. Loved that they didn't get together right away and that they were involved in sports. I'm also wondering if Lisa and jack ended up getting together.

I like how realistic this story is. A lot of lesbian stories start out with the girls jumping into a serious relationship right off the bat which is fun and entertaining but in life that doesn't happen often. I'm glad your story takes it a bit slower.

I'm so glad that it was a happy ending for them, though I was worried for a while there. The story was very good and demanded all my attention. It was emotional rollercoaster, but I supported Steph and Kieran until the very end. If you ever write that other story in the Besotted universe, I'll be sure to read it :)

kieran makes me so angry, i'm fustrated at how she is reacting... i have this feeling that kieran does have feelings for steph but won't admitt them.

not logged in Loved the story. I hope you write another one soon.

not logged in Heys again! My bad for spamming you with reviews. ._. It's just that your chapters are the perfect length for em. :P I'm glad that Kieran is still pro at basketball.. I feel like one of her fangirls. xD

not logged in I saw this coming. The Kieran thing and also the Jack and Lisa thing. xD So vague. :3

not logged in LMFAO. Okay. First and foremost, fail bodyguards. :P If they were girls it would'be been more effective. AND LOL. The present Bea got for Kieran was so obvious LOL.