Reviews for Besotted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Woot! Shadow! Nu... You jumped 2 years? Poor Kieran is so darn depressing. Hmm, hmm, I see what you're doing here and it's working. Okay, I forgive you for jumping 2 years... maybe… okay, fine! :P Bea knocking some sense into Kieran was a nice touch. I'd have done the same if I was her. Very nice reunion scenes. The way Morgan acted makes me wish you made Kieran take it all out on her. Just to see the sisters bond. The way the scene played out it was very realistic though. :) And bo! Steph with a blond tall boy? So so wrong. Should be a show off between him and Kieran. Kieran would win both hands down, but it would be fun to see her crush him. :P I'm all for confrontation. hehe Can't wait to read the last chapter and see how everything turns out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great history! Congratulations! |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for finishing your story! I've been reading Besotted for some time now, and I just wanted to tell you that it's absolutely beautiful. I would have to say it is the best written story I've ever read on fiction press, and you are a brilliant writer. I read a lot of books, heck I'm majoring in the subject, so know I'm telling you the truth when I tell you how wonderful this story is. You ought to consider sending it to a publisher. I would buy it. You have a knack for making reader frustrated with events and characters, and deeply care for them as well. Thank you again, so much, for sharing this beautiful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great end to a great fic. On one hand I kind of would have liked to have seen all the different reactions of them getting back together, but I understand that could have easily dragged this fic on for a few more chapters too. Regardless, a fine job, and I look forward to your other works in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, i'm happy the way it ended, it was cute and i can't wait to read more of your stories! |
![]() ![]() Oh,oh,ohh...no...*tries repeatedly to scroll down* NO ! Is the world finally coming to an end ?*snigger* Obviously this piece of work is... Youve done it. Ok,the last chapter was as always long(but not nearly long enough;D) both sides emotions and reactions were easily understandable and we got finally to see a strongly shaken Kieran. well done again ! but there are still open questions that would have been nice to explore more...like how did the friends and families react after hearing of there rekindled relationship? the reader can only guess how all this could have played out in detail overall,we have closure and a "happy ending" xD keep writing stories if it makes you happy G Lie |
![]() ![]() I've been following your story since the start (too lazy to sign in), and I have to say that it was great from start to end. Very good work! Although I can't help but to wonder about Gerry. He was never really mentioned again after getting rejected by Steph, so how did she break the news to him and what was his reaction to the whole situation? Looking forward to your future works! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Firstly I want to say thanks for fininshing this story. There were times thriughout when I had thought that you had definately given up, only to be pleasantly surprised with a new chapter. Secondly I want to say thank you for an awesome read. I had me captivated and anticipating updates like very few other stories have. I absolutely love your characters and find their depth a refreshing change to a lot of the charcters I have come across of late. I also enjoyed the plot development, eventhough at times I hated (only a bit) for screwing up the happiness. Again bravo, and I cant wait till the next story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a very very very evil person. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read this and loved it. I can't wait for the last chapter and i hope it comes soon. |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Hope u can make more graphic little scenes with Steph and Kieran. |
![]() ![]() thank you for updating this great piece of work and YaY...there will be another chapter ! and even though it was some time ago when i read the last chapter... i still get easily sucked right back into the story keep up your good work ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmp..Cliffhanger!LOL it's about time you update finally after the long wait..and yeah i thought also that this was the last chapter and feels sad about it but i'm glad you didn't end it yet! it brightens up my day :) Really Great chapter..hope you update soon.. I'm sure all of the others that following your story are happy and eager to see more of Besotted.. Goodluck and more power.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() there should be sequel after this ends. seriously. think about it. good stuff. |