Reviews for Apology 1
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Beautiful, it feels very raw and honest, and it's pretty intense. I like the way you formatted it because it seems to be more spontaneous and not premeditate that way. Great work.

Lexi Stewart chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
This is amazing! I love it.
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
Wow. Beautiful. Sort of force rhyming, but beaitiful nontheless. You're really good!