Reviews for Apology 2
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I really like the way this one flowed, and the rhyming seems to be better than the first one (both good, of course). the thing about guide/star in the dark seems to be a recurring theme... I really like the lines "It’s great that we’re together,/You, them and me." I wonder who "them" is?

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lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
This is really good, (I'm not surprised though; you're really good) hope to see more from you!